dear city i never claimed cypher

Started by Narsh, Mar 25, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Mar 25, 2015
    this weeks cypher, theme was WOAT but did my own thing with it i guess..mixing might be hit or miss lol



    Dear,
    City I never owned never claimed to never grow in one for than a winter straight, wait/
    Set me straight, ventilate venomous enemies that congregate everywhere I go just to say/
    Im a poor I, show them Im maestro tight flow eyebrows raised like d--- yo, wait/
    Han Solo dope star even though I go far Im a vagabond hanging on to every word/
    That she say she waits she’s patient man my muse may never get old/
    Set it in stone everything blown way out of relevant or tentative prose/
    The sediments sold yeah I sold a few rocks rocked more on my neck than I gave to my folks, oh oh/
    Don’t apologize, call it like all the times all of em called you out traumatized and torn/
    honest lives Im a ride never broke mold/
    Mamma cried, daddy died, d--- it I’m grown/
    Fantasized in my eyes I’ve arrived I’m alive on the scene finally feeling home/
    Finally fate has fought for my place in the fountain of faces forever engraved/
    This indian militant finna be relevant, revel in intelligence entities entering another dimension unphased/
    this is for those who moved on without me/
    And those were on the road with me, I prayed/
    But now I’m a slave forever engrained to cadences paved by pandering to pay/
    Pretty sure Im ridiculed for being too original it’s never like they have anything nice to say/
    But I’m twice today what I was last May, so it’s okay, and they can kiss my hey!/

    @LasiK @Jet @csw621 @captain awesome @Mikey1990 @asvdawg @Meero @helpmefam @Grimace @IAmReal @DCG @Fire Squad @JCinator etc
     
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  2. CSW
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    Mar 25, 2015
    :notbad:
     
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Mar 25, 2015
    d--- :nassalute:
     
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    Mar 25, 2015
    :daps:
     
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Mar 25, 2015
    I gotta commend you trying that difficult flow towards the end :wow:

    overall I messed with it theres some talent on this site with you, Jet & Lasik
     
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  6. asvdawg
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    your flow is sick on this bro :clap:
     
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  7. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Mar 25, 2015
    who produced this mang? your voice sounding better also
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Mar 25, 2015
    Thanks fam @asvdawg

    And it was some random dude on r/mhh Ill link it when I'm on a laptop

    Glad you liked it, I did this all in the 30 mins of spare time I had today so it's messy but it works lol
     
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  9. Narsh
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    I'm twice today what I was last May so they can kiss my hey, hey

    :wow:
     
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  10. Narsh
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    Mar 25, 2015
    Some lyrics were wrong, whoops

    Fixed

    Oh and forgot to mention @Skippy @Radeem @Enigma @Michael Myers
     
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    aquaberryares one time I made sex

    Mar 25, 2015
    I dig the flow on this. keep this s--- up.
     
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    @Mike Tyson creepin'
     
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  13. Mike Tyson
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    Mike Tyson big cuntry's alias

    Mar 25, 2015
    good energy throughout.
    your flow and voice are improved from the stuff i listened to from a few months ago
    i still can't understand what you're saying 100% of the time, but this is a step in the right direction.
     
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  14. Narsh
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    appreciate the listen m8, and yeah i cant even udnerstand what im saying on this take lol

    im hopefully gonna work on a short project soon where the mixing and everything wont be handled by me haha. i don't know what im doing half the time :coleshh:
     
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  15. attila
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    You sound like Lil Wayne after he s----d some d-ck.
     
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  16. Narsh
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    sounds like thugger thugger baby
     
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    Hard to understand, but I dig it a lot. I love your flow on it.
     
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  18. Narsh
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    thanks man! i thought it would get a but too one-note, even though i tried to switch it up at the end, so im glad you liked it

    i really need to work on something thats well produced/mixed though, not just this random bs smh
     
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  19. tm87
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    Mar 26, 2015
    Narsh f---ing KILLIN' IT 2015. Make a little money leave a little on the dresser
    Make a little money leave a little on the dresser
     
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    Mar 26, 2015
    You're going in @Narsh flow is great. Like others said it's a little hard to understand it all but this is pretty good, keep it up
     
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