PlayWryte - I've Been (NEW)

Started by ItsPwizz, Apr 6, 2023, in Music Add to Reading List

  1. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

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  2. Slyk
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    Slyk God made a prophet.

    Apr 6, 2023
    a little darker on this one. mental & physical check-in: you doin well @ItsPwizz ?
     
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  3. Slyk
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    Apr 6, 2023
    also: what's the lyrics at 1:20? :emoji_eggplant:
     
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  4. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Apr 6, 2023
    I’ve been doing okay. Just juggling everything still.
     
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  5. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Apr 6, 2023
    Lyrics

    Bridge x2
    Please save my soul
    I don’t wanna hang this rope
    This is not the way to go
    To see my feet dangle below

    Hook x2
    I’ve been drinking, I’ve been thinking,
    But don’t speak a lot
    If I said it, then I meant it, so
    I just keep these thoughts
    To my self, in this h---,
    That is where my demons watch
    I’ve been feeling this rope, from the ceiling
    I just need to stop

    Verse 1
    I’ve been so depressed, all I f---ing know is stress
    Overwhelming, won’t you tell me, please, is it over yet
    Hoping that I won’t digress, you won’t see me hold my breath
    Praying for a better life, yet here I stand to hope for death

    It’s ironic, this time bomb, that I’m watching, Is diabolic
    But I keep praying, and keep waiting, to see satan, with the line I’m drawing
    This life or death, til my dying breath, in this tighten chest, til I sign off
    Is hard to hold, my heart if full, with so much pain, inside my palms

    Bridge x2
    Please save my soul
    I don’t wanna hang this rope
    This is not the way to go
    To see my feet dangle below

    Hook x2
    I’ve been drinking, I’ve been thinking,
    But don’t speak a lot
    If I said it, then I meant it, so
    I just keep these thoughts
    To my self, in this h---,
    That is where my demons watch
    I’ve been feeling this rope, from the ceiling
    I just need to stop

    Verse 2
    I’ve been so distraught, never handle sober thoughts
    Over drink, til I don’t think, even though I know the cost
    Either way, a price to pay, is a f---ing road I cross
    Jesus Christ, I see the light, I just hope it won’t be god

    A born sinner, been tormented, by every demon, the lord invented
    I speak in tongue, beneath these lungs, I scream for help, but ignored again
    In these dark times, it’s hard to find, a spark to light, the torch within
    Not too far, where the roof starts, my feet hang, where the floor ends

    Bridge x2
    Please save my soul
    I don’t wanna hang this rope
    This is not the way to go
    To see my feet dangle below

    Hook x2
    I’ve been drinking, I’ve been thinking,
    But don’t speak a lot
    If I said it, then I meant it, so
    I just keep these thoughts
    To my self, in this h---,
    That is where my demons watch
    I’ve been feeling this rope, from the ceiling
    I just need to stop
     
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  6. jankland
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    jankland In My Cringe Arc.

    Apr 6, 2023
    Happy to know you're doing alright, it probably isn't much in the grand scheme of things but if you ever want to chat about s--- I'm usually free.

    Song is great btw! Like the lyrics a lot even if they were a slight bit worrying lol
     
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  7. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Apr 6, 2023
    I appreciate you homie.
     
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  8. icecube
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    icecube West Coast is the Best Coast

    Apr 6, 2023
    This is a very well made song my man.

    But yeah, hope you're good man.
     
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  9. Wreckless
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    Apr 6, 2023
    One of your best tracks yet. The bridge and chorus are lit.

    There's a lot of creative talent on S80 but you're probably the only one I would actually bump or have on my playlist. And not just saying this cause you're one of the homies.

    Is there a way to purchase this track so I can add it to my computer library? I just don't do streaming services but still wanna show love.
     
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  10. hargydon
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    hargydon No investigation, no right to speak

    Apr 6, 2023
    I think this is the best I’ve heard from you, the verses are hard af — not just from the soul you’ve put into them but technically too, love the way you switched into different pockets without butchering the content like even the best of the best do. You make Joyner sound like Vanilla Ice.

    Will add to my playlist when it drops on streaming & will share with my irl pals if that’s cool with you?
     
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  11. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Apr 6, 2023
    As of right now there’s no way to purchase but I will get some method up soon.
     
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  12. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

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    Thanks for the attention to detail means a lot and of course I never turn down having my stuff shared.
     
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  13. JMG
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    JMG

    Apr 6, 2023
    Another gem. I like the dark s--- too so this one may be one of my new favorites. You got some serious skill especially song writing. Can't wait to link up on a track. It's coming.

    And f--- @Kevin throwing shots.. Let's banner this. We need some new pics to go with it @ItsPwizz
     
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  14. Kevin
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    Kevin Migo

    Apr 6, 2023
    I'd rather rip my d-ck off and throw it in the river than listen to this...
     
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  15. Kevin
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    Kevin Migo

    Apr 6, 2023
    No offense PwEeZy...
     
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  16. jankland
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    jankland In My Cringe Arc.

    Apr 7, 2023
    This is why you have no friends Kevin.
     
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  17. Ripper Roo
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    Ripper Roo The Biggest Hater

    Apr 7, 2023
    Beautiful song. Very relatable as well. Nice:emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  18. ItsPwizz
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    ItsPwizz PlayWryte

    Apr 9, 2023
    Thanks!
     
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