Jul 17, 2015

Soooo I saw somebody else posted some lyrics to a song he's writing and thought id do the same, sooo yeah here's that.
And yes I realize that I used the same rhymes a couple of times in both verses. And I have this guy who calls himself Skutum Krux(what? Lmao. Isn't that like the name of Venus' moon or something?) who is writing a middle verse for it. Dunno what it's gonna be like at all.
Anyways, criticism and all that good stuff.

In The Mirror
Chorus
Looking at my reflection in the mirror, I don't like what I see, a Monster staring back and it speaks to me, screaming it's time to set me free

Verse 1
Looking at my reflection in the mirror, it starts talking to me, shows me my real self, a dark terror, tells me Carter you're worthless, the world hates you, the one you love despises you, lookin in the mirror I guess my visions gettin clearer, guess I'm a shearer cause I've managed to cut away every thing I hold dear, lookin at my reflection in the mirror, it fills me with fear, starts talkin and it says you're nothin, at first I thought it was bluffing, but I noticed things are gettin ruff an, I'm withering away to dust, man and I collapse to my knees, looking up at the reflection in the mirror, it's a Monster that I see there, only thing I recognize is my blue eyes and hair, then they fade to black and I see a demonic glare, a dark voice speaks and somethin tells me beware but I don't f---in care, then I hear in my head fight it if you dare but a monsters what you've become, tell myself no, but it's screaming louder booming like a drum, till my body becomes numb, I've gone completely dumb, lookin in the mirror, I give up the fight because it's right and I know I'm scum, go to drown myself in rum, see my reflection in the bottle it says when you're gone you'll be soon forgotten, rot in pieces cause your soul is rotten, standing on the edge, see my reflection in this phone, says these final words, you're deserving of all the loss you've gotten, and You was f---in misbegotten, my blood is guncotton, take a step and I fall, light turns dark as my body makes the rope tense and tauten

Chorus
Looking at my reflection in the mirror, I don't like what I see, a Monster staring back and it speaks to me, screaming it's time to set me free

Verse
Rot in pieces to Mr Carter, gone and soon forgotten, it's 6-Trè now my soul is rotten, the old me's gone, dead pan stare on my face no more nice guy I'm not your friend, failed to reach what I sought, it wasn't begotten, so I made a deal with the f---in Devil, now I'm on a new level, Demons on my shoulder, I've got several, my minds no longer here, I've become ethereal, my mind state is so serial, 6-T-R-E I'm a goddang Imperial, twisted insane I've got the type of material that'll tear up your venereal, but that's immaterial, I'm The Realest Ever, it's Too Real Entertainment, I've reached a whole new level of attainment, this is my lyrical infotainment, can't stop me with an arraignment, can't be held by any containment, your efforts are wasted, I'm a monster that crash landed through the pavement, lost my way cause I got complacent, So rot in pieces to, wait who? d---, gone and forgotten, it's 6-T-R-E now my soul is rotten, lookin in the mirror all I see is a Ragged Robin, a monster that the Devil had begotten.

Chorus
Looking at my reflection in the mirror, I don't like what I see, a Monster staring back and it speaks to me, screaming it's time to set me free