Who Am I? - Jaba (second single off debut album)

Started by Jaba24, Aug 29, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Jaba24
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Aug 29, 2015


    Credits -
    Me for lyrics/rapping
    Me for cover
    Me for mixing
    Python for beat

    Lyrics -
    Intro
    yo
    yo WHO AM I?
    yo yo
    WHO AM I?
    one time for my mind (WHO AM I? [be in background]
    and two for yours…
    yo WHO AM I?

    Bridge/Chorus - 0:21
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Im right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    No ones saying, I’m right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    The one, somehow disappeared (again..)
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear

    verse 1 - 0:42
    Lets take it back when no girl would ever pay attention to me
    Or maybe they did and I was just to shy mentally
    thinking to myself why the h--- would they even mention me?
    funny how this confidence is now killing me
    it was better back when i had no b---- f---ing on me
    back in class using my tucking technique
    cus i was too scared to talk to ‘em, but that didn’t stop the lil pervert in me
    (man i was disgusting)
    but then one day my friends b---- started talking and geez
    didn’t hear a word she said, cus i was too busy staring at them ti--ies
    nd a--- too, something id pound two, or three times
    but in my life id never smashed anything and now i got this fine dime,
    flirting with me? something isn’t right,
    i don’t do drugs but did i get high tonight? second hand smoke is a thing right?..
    alright, i probably sound like a dumbass haha
    anyways back to the b----, i wonder if her p----’s tight?
    Guess ill find out pretty soon, maybe tonight
    wait.. f--- she has a boyfriend wait what?
    2 weeks later she breaks up,
    moves on to the next one
    but I’m not the next one
    wait its January and she’s had 3 guys already this month?
    ehh probably just bad luck
    no way she is a slut
    now she’s giving me signs like she likes me?
    but what about her guy currently?
    if only i would have known this was nothing compared to what she would do to me eventually
    when she would get rid of me, but grab me back and grab my sack
    and cheat with me, and take my viriginity, when she was still with another guy jesus forgive me
    but at least she broke up with that dude right after we did it, right?
    so i should probably just stay with her
    shed never do this to me
    is what poor old me thought
    and this is just another song about the goodbye girl
    who has ruined my world
    i was never like this
    she changed me, and I’m scared i won’t change again
    so many people in my life, so many friends say it over and over again
    WHO AM I?
    yo WHO AM I?
    Good question
    I don’t really have an answer at this time, sorry for the inconvenience
    all i know is lately ive been running up and down the streets
    looking for cute girls to meet
    thinking if i could add ‘em to my book then id be really happy
    i don’t even know if i can find that someone
    maybe they gotta find me
    but if they gotta find me? then they searched for me?
    s----s f---ing confusing
    nothing makes sense
    all i know is, ever since we broke up, i got b------s on my d-ck
    but it doesn’t feel good, it f---ing feels like s---
    these hoes are too easy i need someone who i can click with
    someone to connect with
    not to just have sex with
    but to share every breath with


    but Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Im right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    No ones saying, I’m right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    The one, somehow disappeared (again..)
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear



    Feedback is much appreciated!!


    Credits -
    Me for lyrics/rapping
    Me for cover
    Me for mixing
    Python for beat

    Lyrics -
    Intro
    yo
    yo WHO AM I?
    yo yo
    WHO AM I?
    one time for my mind (WHO AM I? [be in background]
    and two for yours…
    yo WHO AM I?

    Bridge/Chorus - 0:21
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Im right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    No ones saying, I’m right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    The one, somehow disappeared (again..)
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear

    verse 1 - 0:42
    Lets take it back when no girl would ever pay attention to me
    Or maybe they did and I was just to shy mentally
    thinking to myself why the h--- would they even mention me?
    funny how this confidence is now killing me
    it was better back when i had no b---- f---ing on me
    back in class using my tucking technique
    cus i was too scared to talk to ‘em, but that didn’t stop the lil pervert in me
    (man i was disgusting)
    but then one day my friends b---- started talking and geez
    didn’t hear a word she said, cus i was too busy staring at them ti--ies
    nd a--- too, something id pound two, or three times
    but in my life id never smashed anything and now i got this fine dime,
    flirting with me? something isn’t right,
    i don’t do drugs but did i get high tonight? second hand smoke is a thing right?..
    alright, i probably sound like a dumbass haha
    anyways back to the b----, i wonder if her p----’s tight?
    Guess ill find out pretty soon, maybe tonight
    wait.. f--- she has a boyfriend wait what?
    2 weeks later she breaks up,
    moves on to the next one
    but I’m not the next one
    wait its January and she’s had 3 guys already this month?
    ehh probably just bad luck
    no way she is a slut
    now she’s giving me signs like she likes me?
    but what about her guy currently?
    if only i would have known this was nothing compared to what she would do to me eventually
    when she would get rid of me, but grab me back and grab my sack
    and cheat with me, and take my viriginity, when she was still with another guy jesus forgive me
    but at least she broke up with that dude right after we did it, right?
    so i should probably just stay with her
    shed never do this to me
    is what poor old me thought
    and this is just another song about the goodbye girl
    who has ruined my world
    i was never like this
    she changed me, and I’m scared i won’t change again
    so many people in my life, so many friends say it over and over again
    WHO AM I?
    yo WHO AM I?
    Good question
    I don’t really have an answer at this time, sorry for the inconvenience
    all i know is lately ive been running up and down the streets
    looking for cute girls to meet
    thinking if i could add ‘em to my book then id be really happy
    i don’t even know if i can find that someone
    maybe they gotta find me
    but if they gotta find me? then they searched for me?
    s----s f---ing confusing
    nothing makes sense
    all i know is, ever since we broke up, i got b------s on my d-ck
    but it doesn’t feel good, it f---ing feels like s---
    these hoes are too easy i need someone who i can click with
    someone to connect with
    not to just have sex with
    but to share every breath with


    but Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Im right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    No ones saying, I’m right here
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    The one, somehow disappeared (again..)
    Is anybody f---ing listening?
    Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear



    Feedback is much appreciated!!
     
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  2. Jaba24
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Aug 29, 2015
    Anyone? lol wishing I had that @Narsh following on here
     
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Aug 30, 2015
     
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    Skaff Lit

    Aug 30, 2015
    I dont think being a rapper is something for you man
     
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  5. Narsh
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    Aug 30, 2015
    I get like an Andre 3k vibe with how spit sometimes, but it's too sloppy so it comes off like a bad version of modern day eminem lol

    I'd try to listen to more outkast and try to practice your rhythm. The lyrics aren't to my taste but at least you're telling a story you kno? I have trouble with that

    You really do sound like Em at times haha


    Hook has potential tbh I like it
     
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Aug 30, 2015
    Its a hobby. I still try to improve and to make something great
     
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Aug 31, 2015
    in a good way or bad way? lol

    and thanks.
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Aug 31, 2015
    well sometimes its too forced but like ur voice itself sometimes sounds like him which is a good thing imo

    you just need to get more control over how ur rapping
     
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