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Vardø - Too Human (debut song)

Started by Hana bi, Aug 29, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Hana bi
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    I've released my first song and would love to hear some opinions on it. Any type of feedback is appreciated.
    Also, what genre of music do you think is the best to describe the song? I can't think of anything besides "alternative pop", yet I'm not sure if this is the right one. Any suggestions?
     
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  2. Cyreides
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    Sort of experimental, kind of ambient and atmospheric. It's very calming and relaxing. Kinda downtempo sounding pop? But a great song regardless.

    I'm actually very intrigued by this m8, and I'm gonna pm you about a possible collaboration if you're interested. This is the sort of sound/singing I'm looking for for my upcoming EP.
     
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    @CreativeSXN this is definitely worth checking out. give this some love fam
     
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  4. Ricky
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    Ricky FORUM PRIME WILL BE BACK

    Aug 29, 2015
    d---, this is nice, really nice
     
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    this is fantastic...howd you get those effects on your vocals m8?

    with more focused lyrics, you could make something str8 up beautiful :allears:

    let me knowwwohhhohhohh :allears:
     
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  6. Hana bi
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    Yeah, I agree with ambient/atmospheric and downtempo. 40 is my main influence so it makes sense.
    Thank you for the kind words. And I am open to any type of collaboration. If I like it/see the potential and have time to work on it, I will be glad to!
    You can also get in touch with me on twitter/soundcloud/gmail.
     
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  7. Hana bi
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    I'm glad you enjoyed it!
     
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    Would it be best for me to email you or message you on soundcloud/twitter?
     
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  9. Hana bi
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    thanks mane. I made the harmonies using Autotune out of different vocal takes. Nothing special.
    Actually, I've been working on improving my lyrics lately. Once I finish all the songs I'm working on rn, I am going to start working on the new stuff. Can't wait, tbh!
     
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    email or soundcloud, I think. These both don't have this weird limitation to 140 characters.
     
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    @Cyreides do you only produce or sing as well?
     
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  12. Cyreides
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    Just produce sadly.

    EDIT: sent an email your way, btw
     
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    Yeah, just got it. I'll listen to and response as soon as possible (within an hour, I think).
     
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  14. Juney Dark
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    Not my type of music...at all, but I like the vibe, keep doing you :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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    take ur time lol, I won't be able to respond till later tonight anyways cause I'll b at work
     
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    Thanks for giving it a chance!
     
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    I'll ghost write for u tbh
     
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    okay, you and Quentin Miller on my team lol
     
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    For real tho lmao I've always been into writing songs for people that can execute them better than me
     
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    I'd categorise it at ambient/downtempo for sure. Really good imo. :wow:
     
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