Aug 30, 2015 New freestyle over 'Check' by Young Thug. Any feedback is always appreciated! (Lyrics in the spoiler) Spoiler New heads, Old heads, 2 sides, One religion, Been on both sides, and they equally as ignorant, But they both right, See, Hip hop lost the roots, Keeping it in one place, Stagnant, Like boxing, ooh, Homie, Nah, it's cool, See we planted up a field of roots, All over the world, Connected by soul, and soot, We the new, generation, Y, Got the youth vote, See we be the UFC, Neva doubt the evolution, Or you might, Get Mcgregor’d, Wait, Ya'll be Aldo tho, Keep us waiting, Looking at the clock, Where's Waldo tho? He ain't show, Talked a lot of s--- about the other side, I'm just here up in the middle, Chillin, along for the ride, Tryna contribute all that I can until I lose my stride, Started as a pebble, Ended as a snowball Rollin, All the way from Armstrong, to King Street, Homie, Hide, Spit a vail of cyanide, Every time I try and write, Some things come out, I prolly shouldn't of said, But f--- it, I'm here now, Go for broke, Or I'm broke, Smokin tokin and chokin, Is all that I can hope to do, To go and deal with the stress, Sess, kills it, I guess, Mess building, Distress call, Opposite of talking sipping Effen and blessed, Second guess every lyric, Every guess is a test, And I passed, With flying colours, Defiant MFer, Self doubt, be dead.
Aug 30, 2015 This is dope man, flow and delivery are on point! Only thing I could suggest for some criticism is to try enunciating some of your words more clearly, it can be difficult when doing faster flows like this to actually get each word to stand out, but doing so would put this over the top! (It's still crazy nice as it is, just wanted to try to give some feedback)
Aug 30, 2015 I really appreciate the honest feedback man! Gives me something to work on this week. Glad you liked it though!
Aug 30, 2015 im home this week so unless i get the house to myself i dont think ill be able to go off how i want to with a collab between us hahah...when im back in bosotn next week for sure keep an eye out for my new song later today doe bruh
Aug 30, 2015 you two are gonna be incredible on a track. both of you need to go hard as f---. Narsh... I need that flow back from the track that you sent me to mix...
Aug 30, 2015 Not a problem man! Take your time, no rush. I'll see if I can cook us up a beat to use. And you know it bro!! Been waiting on it all day
Aug 30, 2015 Oh you know it Ahahaha, thank you man. I'll be posting a lot more of these in the near future, keep a look out!
Aug 30, 2015 You should start doing the reddit cypher a too so people can hear both of on the same beat like once a week
Aug 30, 2015 R/mhh does like weakly cyphers. I'm really not a fan of a lot of the people there but I use it to rap on a random beat each week U don't even need to post on there tbh u could just see why beat they're using for the week (and what dumb theme they came up with)
