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Started by Narsh, Sep 10, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Sep 10, 2015
    something weird i did quick...cypher for the week



    words:
    ayo look
    i packed up my promises i passed on to the other side
    cancerous vermin i was advanced on their lullabies
    crying out for common sense but all that did was by me time
    chances are that traffic in the mind is sign of crazy eyes

    and they saw what i had hid inside
    mamma why they idolize
    me since i was barely five

    the frequencies are seen again
    mending me my meager mind
    malleable putty like
    i dont play tho this aside

    tongue in cheeck i love my life
    makin fun of me i love your laugh
    i love ur laugh

    a comedian like carlin crashed
    my car into my aura’s house
    a poorer sport
    aware his home is where he lost his heart
    no car alarm
    if only it had made a sound

    under boards and solid ground
    thunder roared it all surrounds
    they dont get the illness crowns of thorns
    a frown upon their furrowed brow
    ay
    ay
    ay
    hi am i on substances?
    bigger ears like micky mouse
    my allowance rupturing
    dumbo with a hundred bars
    the elephant inside the car
    in the room on the yard
    canvas bloom ruminate
    fancy how it dissipates

    my iconic living state

    state of living lucid lately
    anyways, exhume the haven
    heavy weight eradicated
    memories all migrated
    not meant to gain mileage
    we are one of one in one state
    ay
    the material will always fade
    they can’t erase our eye engraved
    panoramic piousness
    stand around in silence this
    a chance to wish a final wish

    im living where they let me live

    @CreativeSXN
     
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Sep 10, 2015
    the flow at this point :rickross::bigquint::banderas::rejoice::weebey::whew:
     
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    Narsh

    Sep 10, 2015
    this was literally just a 1 take so it shouldve came out much better lol but im gladd you still f--- with it man!!

    this whole track took like the last 25-30 mins only...smh
     
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Sep 10, 2015
    love how the flow picks up after the first part
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Sep 10, 2015
    Great stuff! You rode the beat well. :emoji_fire:
     
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  6. SaviorOfS80
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    SaviorOfS80 The Second Cumming

    Sep 10, 2015
    Roommate just asked is that drizzy
     
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    Narsh

    Sep 10, 2015
    :drake2:
     
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    Juney Dark Art Deco Killer Mango

    Sep 11, 2015
    The flow keeps getting better, and better.. good s---

    :daps:
     
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    Narsh

    Sep 11, 2015
    didnt really feel like putting much effort in this week so im probably deleting this soon but im glad you still liked it man!
     
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    Narsh

    Sep 12, 2015
    mama why they idolize me since i was barely five
     
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