Help Need help with a bio

Started by Cyreides, Nov 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 14, 2015
    I'm trying to get something together for a submission to music blogs, but I need to figure out some sort of one pager bio thing with relevant info about the album I'm working on, and just in general about me and my production, but I don't have the slightest clue how to write a bio or what's relevant.

    Captain Awesome gave me this as a sort of template to work off of, but I'm still clueless as to how to actually approach this:

    bio -
    LA-based alternative blues/rock band NightOwl is made of 4 friends, Daniel Focil, Jackson Englund, and brothers Xavier and Bernardo Aguilera. Although the 4 grew up playing music together, things picked up in the summer of 2014 when they began jamming in Jackson’s garage late at night. “We would jam for hours on end, playing whatever came to mind,” says Jackson.


    Having been raised on 60s/70s blues, rock, and psychedelic bands, such as Creedence Clearwater Revival, Led Zeppelin, and The Rolling Stones, Jackson’s garage quickly became a nesting ground for groove-laden tunes with bluesy-rock undertones. “Our influences are inevitably more classically inclined,” says Daniel. “We’re mostly rock n’ roll.” NightOwl’s sound is also augmented by the playful, adventurous spirit of the beaches and deserts they grew up around.


    Their late-night garage sessions laid out the foundation for the band’s collaborative setup, in that many songs have spawned purely from jam sessions. “Usually, we’ll start playing a random melody, and then it ends up turning into a full song – almost like we know how it was supposed to be played out all along,” says Jackson. Bernardo adds, “Sometimes, one of us will bring a song to the table, but by the end of the session, we transform it into something completely different because we all add our individual piece to it.”


    While some songs are written and structured off the bat, others are kept as rough drafts and polished during their live performances. “None of the songs are ever complete,” says Daniel. “We tighten up the screws once we go into the studio.” Although NightOwl is collaborative and improvisational in nature, however, they are in no way a jam band. The end product is always structured and connected by a rugged, catchy allure that compares to modern-day bands, such as Arctic Monkeys and The Black Keys.


    NightOwl is currently putting together the finishing touches on their EP, which was recorded at Stag Street with Gustavo Farias and Dan Moore. “Since we collaborate, and essentially, play each other’s songs, the EP will be eclectic,” says Xavier. “None of the songs will sound the same.


    And their photo (attached)

    Can anyone offer me some serious advice on this? @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Juney Dark
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    Juney Dark Art Deco Killer Mango

    Nov 14, 2015
    s--- man.. I wouldn't know where to start myself..lol

    :em55:
     
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  3. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Nov 14, 2015
    Wouldn't have a clue how to help. @Narsh has a background in writing so he could potentially be of help. @BigCountry as well.
     
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  4. DKC
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    DKC shortygonletmecrush

    Nov 14, 2015
    narsh sux n has no degree i graduated c-m laude
     
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  5. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 14, 2015
    wud u b willing to help me with this fam?
     
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  6. Creation
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    Creation By Any Means

    Nov 14, 2015
    Take a list of the following:


    Where Youre from.
    How has where youre from inspired you or motivated you.
    List youre favorite type of music & what it has done to put you in a position where you are at the moment.
    Talk about your past, events that led you to here.
    Talk about where you want to be in 10 years.


    i hope some of them help :)
     
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  7. DKC
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    DKC shortygonletmecrush

    Nov 14, 2015
    I've never written anything like this but I can certainly edit it if you write somethin!
     
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  8. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 15, 2015
    d---... i'll probably try

    but I'm worried it's going to be rambling nonsense and/or irrelevant s---, and written terribly. I'm a horrible writer lol
     
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  9. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 15, 2015
    One last mention because I need a few things if any of you guys got time
    • how would you describe my music
    • what genre would you place it in
    • who do I sound like to you
    • what do you think makes my music stand apart from other artists?
    etc.

    anything you can tell me would be a great help

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  10. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Nov 15, 2015
    Atmospheric and heavy.

    EDM/Dubstep/Electronica.

    Gonna skip this coz I'm not sure.

    As a listener I'm drawn into your production because of it's ability to paint a picture without any words. Or something like that.
     
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  11. WPG
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    WPG sxn80 Rory Gilmore

    Nov 15, 2015
    i write bios all the time. i'm tired and my brain is fried and i'm not going to go through it line-by-line, but what you have is actually pretty good. just make the beginning more creative--say something declarative about the group up top instead of jumping into rote information. i.e.- talk about the band like you're telling a story. try to run themes throughout. and as a technical point: don't say you're finishing up an album or whatever. talk about the record as if it's done, and describe in a way that's enticing.
     
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  12. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Nov 15, 2015
    The one in the OP is an example that CA sent to Cyreides.

    Cy's asking for someone to write one for him if possible.
     
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  13. WPG
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    WPG sxn80 Rory Gilmore

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    oh. well, see my first sentence, lol.
     
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  14. KnowRayJones
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    Here's Kendrick Lamars bio from his old EPK website, You overthinking it bro,

    "Only 26, Kendrick Lamar stands to be one of the most influential rap artists of his time. Making his break into popular culture with 2011’s Section.80, the Compton native has continued to help build the legacy of TDE. His medley of gripping narratives and melodic cadence are among the slew of reasons why he is becoming a cultural staple. In 2012, his label home Top Dawg Entertainment announced a joint distribution deal with Interscope/Aftermath Records, leading to his platinum selling debut good kid, m.A.A.d city. Since then Kendrick’s success has catapulted, but he remains firm in his unwillingness to compromise creativity, truth, or simply the essence of who he is."
     
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    c-m laude is the dumbest s--- word ever...it has c-m in it
     
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    and it sounds like c-m load
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

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    :laff:
     
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  18. lil uzi vert stan
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    Nov 15, 2015
    yeah @Cyreides i sent that to u literally as a template to plug in ur own personal info and work from there. @WPG is right in his suggestions, although i think you need to brainstorm what exactly youre going for, what influencers youre looking to reach, what sound ur trying to tap into etc before u start promoting anything.
     
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  19. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

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    sry this might b a dumb question, just woke up but what do u mean
     
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  20. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 15, 2015
    "Ohio-based electronic/hip hop producer Sebastian Chapman, otherwise
    known as Cyreides, sets out to bring vivid stories to life through his
    music. And although the he’s always had a desire to be create, it
    wasn’t until the summer of 2013 when picked up a copy of FL Studios on
    a whim and found where his place was in the production world.

    Cyreides is currently gearing up for the release of his album “Autumn
    Storm” this November."

    suggestions anyone?
     
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