Money/Power (Kanye West "Cold" Remix)

Started by Narsh, Dec 13, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Dec 13, 2015


    @CreativeSXN

    walkin in my what an entrance i got all henchmen they do what i say
    walkin in my what an entrance i got all the b------s they flocking my way
    walkin in like I’ve been dennis the menace im in it to pick at your brain
    walkin in my what an entrance i meant to be humble i fumbled the play

    hook:
    take a seat in the car eddie bauer
    i can’t afford to give you flowers
    i hope you dont mind that, i wish i could’ve
    this all just reminds me of when i skipped my dinners
    all my life i want money, power x4

    verse 1:
    i want the money the power the b------s the riches everything to be safe
    i wanna make it my business to give you the wishlist you wanted since 8
    i want to just buy you like everything cuz of the smile it puts on your face
    i want to just sit there and smile cuz of the smile it puts on your face
    i want to just sit there and smile cuz of the way you keep making the grade
    im so so proud of my sister so so proud of the wizard
    she got a scholarship cuz of her brain
    im lovin the way that youre taking my training and making your way in the world
    and i know that might be arrogant but ive know u since u were a girl
    im just saying im saying im saying you mean the world
    this is a moment ive waited for i wanted you to just know what youre worth
    in this life youll be cheated on hated on and youll be treated like dirt
    Just know what youre worth
    im coming in quick i know it might hurt
    i wanted some syrup my lungs never learned
    How to adapt to how much i smoke
    Im putting in work
    and she needs all this money ive been wasting
    i just wanna waste it at the dollar tree
    I waste what I have I have nothing to say
    I waste what I have I have nothing today
    My waist a nice belt wrapped i think a fendi knockoff
    My neck cold like I aint ever went to doctors
    wearing me some yeezys i look like Unabomber
    being profiled must be some sort of karma

    hook:
    all my life i want money, power x4
    take a seat in the car eddie bauer
    i can’t afford to give you flowers
    i hope you dont mind that, i wish i could’ve
    this all just reminds me of when i skipped my dinners
    all my life i want money, power x4

    verse 2:
    got a itchin to get me some profits
    i got a vision thats been in my optics
    my sister says im extra awesome
    but i know im a mess of problems
    all my life I’ve chased down the next deposit
    all my life i strove for a bigger closet
    cuz my mom my dad man they’ve seen the struggle
    so i hurl my self towards the coming hurdles
    life it hurts but i dont let it get to me
    i know thats cliche but I’ve been spittin frees
    so until they pay me this is all they get
    i was a 90s baby smoking cigarettes
    Candy can these people not get the gist
    Maybe Ill be a hypocrite
    but thats cause Im so deliberate
    Passionate bout what I have interest in
    I got a trust that i aint been faking its
    with me and you and this place they let us in
    i wanna show u right now ur my medicine
    and i can swallow it real quick and s---

    at the request of narsh's sister
     
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  2. Narsh
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    Dec 13, 2015
    inb4 theg :'(
     
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  3. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Dec 13, 2015
    hey
     
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  4. Charlton01
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    Dec 13, 2015
    If it wasnt for you posting the lyrics I'd find it very hard to follow what you're saying man, mostly because the mix is not the best, the beat is too bass heavy, maybe turn up the volume for the vox a little?
    But also cause your flow is very fast, thers a lot of syllables being fit in your bars.

    In saying that though it does work, the flow over the beat is tight, just a little hard to follow.
    Also your syllables aren't very well articulated, but i guess that comes with the fast flow.

    I do dig your flow though dude :)
    keep on keepin on
     
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Dec 13, 2015
    ok this harrrrrrrrd
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Dec 13, 2015
    yeah the vocals defintiely turned out too quite, but the way i had them normally they sounded even worse b/c of the bass and s--- as you said.

    good looks man, and yeah i know i slurr a lot throughout this track. i kinda just wanted to get the rhythm down more than anything

    thanks for the feedback though i really appreciate it!! hope you check out more of my s--- in the future :emoji_thumbsup:
    rt
     
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  7. Michael Myers
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    Dec 13, 2015
    For a minute I thought/hoped this would be a response :emoji_confused:
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Dec 13, 2015
    a response to what?
     
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  9. ArthurDW
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    Dec 13, 2015
    :lol3::ummmm::biggiepissed:
     
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    :dwight:
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Dec 13, 2015
    oh that? yeah this is a response u should press play
     
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  12. gorealsteady
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    gorealsteady heal & create

    Dec 13, 2015
    Real recognize real!
     
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  13. Narsh
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    :empalm:
     
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  14. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Dec 13, 2015
    shook

    nice play count u got there :lol6:
     
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    gorealsteady heal & create

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    ^change yours too
     
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  16. Michael Myers
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    Why did you edit your post lol. And failed because the quote still shows it
     
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  17. ArthurDW
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    Dec 13, 2015
    You know making a narsh diss that gets a lot of plays says more about narsh's reputation than about you?

    Edit: don't want to d-ck ride or something but this really needed to be said
     
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  18. CODEiNE DEMON
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    CODEiNE DEMON One foot stuck in the tarpit of my ways

    Dec 13, 2015
    Pretty sure the people who like narsh are some of the most intelligent and decent posters on the board
     
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  19. CODEiNE DEMON
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    CODEiNE DEMON One foot stuck in the tarpit of my ways

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    Although disliking narsh doesn't immediately make you bad
     
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  20. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Dec 13, 2015
    that he's disliked because people listen to the track clowning him hardcore on repeat?

    yeah i noticed that
     
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