Aug 29, 2015 Credits - Me for lyrics/rapping Me for cover Me for mixing Python for beat Lyrics - Intro yo yo WHO AM I? yo yo WHO AM I? one time for my mind (WHO AM I? [be in background] and two for yours… yo WHO AM I? Bridge/Chorus - 0:21 Is anybody f---ing listening? Im right here Is anybody f---ing listening? No ones saying, I’m right here Is anybody f---ing listening? The one, somehow disappeared (again..) Is anybody f---ing listening? Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear verse 1 - 0:42 Lets take it back when no girl would ever pay attention to me Or maybe they did and I was just to shy mentally thinking to myself why the h--- would they even mention me? funny how this confidence is now killing me it was better back when i had no b---- f---ing on me back in class using my tucking technique cus i was too scared to talk to ‘em, but that didn’t stop the lil pervert in me (man i was disgusting) but then one day my friends b---- started talking and geez didn’t hear a word she said, cus i was too busy staring at them ti--ies nd a--- too, something id pound two, or three times but in my life id never smashed anything and now i got this fine dime, flirting with me? something isn’t right, i don’t do drugs but did i get high tonight? second hand smoke is a thing right?.. alright, i probably sound like a dumbass haha anyways back to the b----, i wonder if her p----’s tight? Guess ill find out pretty soon, maybe tonight wait.. f--- she has a boyfriend wait what? 2 weeks later she breaks up, moves on to the next one but I’m not the next one wait its January and she’s had 3 guys already this month? ehh probably just bad luck no way she is a slut now she’s giving me signs like she likes me? but what about her guy currently? if only i would have known this was nothing compared to what she would do to me eventually when she would get rid of me, but grab me back and grab my sack and cheat with me, and take my viriginity, when she was still with another guy jesus forgive me but at least she broke up with that dude right after we did it, right? so i should probably just stay with her shed never do this to me is what poor old me thought and this is just another song about the goodbye girl who has ruined my world i was never like this she changed me, and I’m scared i won’t change again so many people in my life, so many friends say it over and over again WHO AM I? yo WHO AM I? Good question I don’t really have an answer at this time, sorry for the inconvenience all i know is lately ive been running up and down the streets looking for cute girls to meet thinking if i could add ‘em to my book then id be really happy i don’t even know if i can find that someone maybe they gotta find me but if they gotta find me? then they searched for me? s----s f---ing confusing nothing makes sense all i know is, ever since we broke up, i got b------s on my d-ck but it doesn’t feel good, it f---ing feels like s--- these hoes are too easy i need someone who i can click with someone to connect with not to just have sex with but to share every breath with but Is anybody f---ing listening? Im right here Is anybody f---ing listening? No ones saying, I’m right here Is anybody f---ing listening? The one, somehow disappeared (again..) Is anybody f---ing listening? Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear Feedback is much appreciated!! Credits - Me for lyrics/rapping Me for cover Me for mixing Python for beat Lyrics - Intro yo yo WHO AM I? yo yo WHO AM I? one time for my mind (WHO AM I? [be in background] and two for yours… yo WHO AM I? Bridge/Chorus - 0:21 Is anybody f---ing listening? Im right here Is anybody f---ing listening? No ones saying, I’m right here Is anybody f---ing listening? The one, somehow disappeared (again..) Is anybody f---ing listening? Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear verse 1 - 0:42 Lets take it back when no girl would ever pay attention to me Or maybe they did and I was just to shy mentally thinking to myself why the h--- would they even mention me? funny how this confidence is now killing me it was better back when i had no b---- f---ing on me back in class using my tucking technique cus i was too scared to talk to ‘em, but that didn’t stop the lil pervert in me (man i was disgusting) but then one day my friends b---- started talking and geez didn’t hear a word she said, cus i was too busy staring at them ti--ies nd a--- too, something id pound two, or three times but in my life id never smashed anything and now i got this fine dime, flirting with me? something isn’t right, i don’t do drugs but did i get high tonight? second hand smoke is a thing right?.. alright, i probably sound like a dumbass haha anyways back to the b----, i wonder if her p----’s tight? Guess ill find out pretty soon, maybe tonight wait.. f--- she has a boyfriend wait what? 2 weeks later she breaks up, moves on to the next one but I’m not the next one wait its January and she’s had 3 guys already this month? ehh probably just bad luck no way she is a slut now she’s giving me signs like she likes me? but what about her guy currently? if only i would have known this was nothing compared to what she would do to me eventually when she would get rid of me, but grab me back and grab my sack and cheat with me, and take my viriginity, when she was still with another guy jesus forgive me but at least she broke up with that dude right after we did it, right? so i should probably just stay with her shed never do this to me is what poor old me thought and this is just another song about the goodbye girl who has ruined my world i was never like this she changed me, and I’m scared i won’t change again so many people in my life, so many friends say it over and over again WHO AM I? yo WHO AM I? Good question I don’t really have an answer at this time, sorry for the inconvenience all i know is lately ive been running up and down the streets looking for cute girls to meet thinking if i could add ‘em to my book then id be really happy i don’t even know if i can find that someone maybe they gotta find me but if they gotta find me? then they searched for me? s----s f---ing confusing nothing makes sense all i know is, ever since we broke up, i got b------s on my d-ck but it doesn’t feel good, it f---ing feels like s--- these hoes are too easy i need someone who i can click with someone to connect with not to just have sex with but to share every breath with but Is anybody f---ing listening? Im right here Is anybody f---ing listening? No ones saying, I’m right here Is anybody f---ing listening? The one, somehow disappeared (again..) Is anybody f---ing listening? Good, cus now I don’t want you to hear Feedback is much appreciated!!
Aug 30, 2015 I get like an Andre 3k vibe with how spit sometimes, but it's too sloppy so it comes off like a bad version of modern day eminem lol I'd try to listen to more outkast and try to practice your rhythm. The lyrics aren't to my taste but at least you're telling a story you kno? I have trouble with that You really do sound like Em at times haha Hook has potential tbh I like it
Aug 31, 2015 well sometimes its too forced but like ur voice itself sometimes sounds like him which is a good thing imo you just need to get more control over how ur rapping